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Title: Crazy Crazy drug fill world {lyric in progress}
Post by: Dogmax on April 08, 2019, 03:23:36 AM
 8)  I know but hey, we're lyric writers right, more to come me think


Hey woman you walking on the wild side

Hey man you know where you're going

Hey kid I see in your eyes no lights on

In this crazy crazy drug fill world


What the hell are they searching for

Death I hear a voice cry

We're all searching for death hahahaha

In this crazy crazy drug fill world


I got a blanket for you a tent as well

Are you okay for food do you understand what I'm saying

I think we need to phone an ambulance for this one

Every fucking night

In this crazy crazy drug fill world

Their's but our's as well


Hey woman you walking on the wild side

Hey man you know where you're going

Hey kid I see in your eyes no lights on

In this crazy crazy drug fill world


I got a blanket for you a tent as well

Are you okay for food do you understand what I'm saying

I think we need to phone an ambulance for this one

Every fucking night

In this drug fill, crazy crazy world

Their's but our's as well


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Title: Re: Crazy Crazy drug fill world {lyric in progress}
Post by: Troispr on May 02, 2019, 09:40:11 AM
Very passionate and I think it's clever that you start the song hey woman, hey man, hey kid as this is an issues that covers all ages.
Title: Re: Crazy Crazy drug fill world {lyric in progress}
Post by: Dogmax on May 02, 2019, 11:26:32 PM
 8)
Very passionate and I think it's clever that you start the song hey woman, hey man, hey kid as this is an issues that covers all ages.

Thank you Troispr hey woman, hey man, hey kid nice one  8)