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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: Jack_Diamond. on February 26, 2019, 10:38:04 AM

Title: High
Post by: Jack_Diamond. on February 26, 2019, 10:38:04 AM

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Title: Re: High
Post by: rightly on February 26, 2019, 05:42:36 PM

I liked what I heard, the I heard, the more became Interested.
 
It does sounds like a very nice intro. If it was mine I'd try to finish it.
It has a special mood. Possibly the longer you leave the more difficult it'll be to get back in there.

Keep em comin'.

Title: Re: High
Post by: pompeyjazz on February 26, 2019, 09:38:12 PM

Very atmospheric Jack. Sounded like an introduction to a Scandanavian crime drama. I liked what you were doing on the bass in particular. Like @Rightly (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=20219) says,  I would try and persevere with this one as it's got great potential. The mood that you have created is special. Don't lose it

Title: Re: High
Post by: MichaelA on February 26, 2019, 11:39:25 PM

The first part is very atmospheric and hypnotic, if a bit quiet compared to other tracks in my feed. The guitar work is really sweet. I like that you have gone for this chilled instrumental vibe, it has lots of charm. Wonderful!


The ending was a little abrupt, of course.


Overall. a totally chilled out journey, good one!

Title: Re: High
Post by: Neil C on March 03, 2019, 12:55:44 PM

Well I think you did what you set out to do.
chilled indeed
:-)
neil

Title: Re: High
Post by: Jack_Diamond. on March 11, 2019, 07:10:50 PM

@Rightly (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=20219) Thank you. after having some time off from it i've come up with some vocal part ideas so i guess its far from finished again.

@pompeyjazz (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=20269) Cheers mate. Ive been watching the bridge recently which could explain things. Ive got some ideas in the works regarding this track now.

@MichaelA (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=21274) Thanks. Im probably gonna re-mix then limit, you are right about low level loudnes.

@Neil C (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=18856) Cheers :)

Title: Re: High
Post by: PaulyX on March 11, 2019, 07:48:21 PM

Nice Jack.  Pretty much anything with things playing backwards in it works for me!  But this was very cool, in particular when it turns that corner at around the 1:20 mark.  Chilled but slightly frosty and sinister too.  You chopped the end of though I think?  Unless that was deliberate.  Anyway, like it! Nice pic on Soundcloud too.

Title: Re: High
Post by: Bankie on March 12, 2019, 02:22:38 PM

Enjoyed that. If there's a change it's screaming out for, it's getting that bass right up to the front. I don't think making it punchy would destroy the feel, but rather help the whole thing along.