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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: macker71165 on January 10, 2019, 03:54:15 PM

Title: unstuck
Post by: macker71165 on January 10, 2019, 03:54:15 PM

   song ive had for a month just recorded


https://soundcloud.com/tony-mcvey/unstuck

Title: Re: unstuck
Post by: pompeyjazz on January 13, 2019, 10:20:25 PM

Well it's a decent song man but if you want to get any feedback then you have to participate. It's a two way thingy  :)

Title: Re: unstuck
Post by: fischermans on January 14, 2019, 07:00:52 AM

I second that what pompeyjazz said. It's a two way thingy. ;) 8) Also it would be much better if you post also the lyrics so one can sing along to find better into the song.
Anyway it's a good song with potential. I found the arrangement a bit washy. You have to work out single instruments for single sections of the song but this is may only me.
Good work Alexander