The Songwriter Forum - songwriting reviews, tips and chat
Songwriter Forum => Lyrics => Topic started by: Orange Mississippi on December 31, 2018, 09:51:17 AM
-
Hi there’s not really a story here it’s just self explanatory I think
Would you hate me if I told you lies ?
There are things that aren’t important
in the cold light of day
things we wished we’d never said
things we wished we could take back
without a delay
chorus
If I went to - heavennn
without saying goodbye
would you hate me
because I’d told you lies
most of you out there know
where I’m coming from
all the things we’ve done
that we know are wrong
chorus
If I went to - heavennn
without saying goodbye
would you hate me
because I’d told you lies
Would you rather
I spared you the hurt and pain ?
or let you see my sun and rain
chorus
If I went to - heavennn
without saying goodbye
would you hate me
because I’d told you lies
there are things that aren’t important
in the cold light of day
things that only get in the way
chorus
If I went to - heavennn
without saying goodbye
would you hate me
because I’d told you lies
Fades
La la la la la : la la la la
La la la la la : la la la la
La la la la la : la la la la
La la la la la : la la la la
La la la la la : la la la la
La la la la la : la la la la
-
Hello and welcome :)
a pretty good set of lyrics which sound like they'd be an easy fit for a song.
Do you have some music on the go for them? Or are you chiefly a lyricist?
You could maybe post a little about yourself so we know a bit about who you are and what you're looking for?
Maybe it could do with a couple of extra la's at the end? 8)
-
Hi thanks I write lyrics - If anyone wants to use them they can