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Title: The Mirror of Fear Tales
Post by: moraamarolaloba on October 11, 2018, 09:15:15 PM
This song shows a strange moment in my life when the fear of suffering was a monster with no face. Surely you will find words that are not properly applied in English, but nevertheless, I hope you appreciate the general context of the song. Thank you. Mora



I look at your eyes to see me
and I discover someone that seeks for herself
from the outside, from the outside

And meanwhile,
at watching me always diluted
in the water of your glance

you become a mirror of the fear tales
you become a mirror of the fear tales

And I close my eyes
to avoid finding
an abandoned house in those eyes

And I close my eyes
to avoid finding
an abandoned house in those eyes

I look at your eyes to see me
and I discover someone that seeks for he
Title: Re: The Mirror of Fear Tales
Post by: LostBoy on October 12, 2018, 11:59:12 AM
Hi Mora, Ive gotta say I enjoyed this. It has an "enigma" vibe that I really like. I like the chopped up hook. Great job! 😁👍
Title: Re: The Mirror of Fear Tales
Post by: cowparsleyman on October 12, 2018, 01:01:56 PM
Whato Mora, I LOVE that bass, and the prod of the backing synths, were they loops? or did you play them. Your voice good too.

Nice work

cpm
Title: Re: The Mirror of Fear Tales
Post by: moraamarolaloba on October 12, 2018, 06:35:50 PM
Quote from: LostBoy on October 12, 2018, 11:59:12 AM
Many thanks @LostBoy (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=20481)
Title: Re: The Mirror of Fear Tales
Post by: moraamarolaloba on October 12, 2018, 06:41:31 PM
Quote from: cowparsleyman on October 12, 2018, 01:01:56 PM
Whato Mora, I LOVE that bass, and the prod of the backing synths, were they loops? or did you play them. Your voice good too.

Nice work

cpm

Thank you. The backing synths are Logic loops, I work a lot with them modifying them according to what I need, they are a fantastic and elastic tool although, at other times, I am the one who with the Midi keyboard makes my own ambients.
everything turns so fast
Title: Re: The Mirror of Fear Tales
Post by: pompeyjazz on October 12, 2018, 10:16:04 PM
This absolutely mesmerized me Mora. It's a very clever piece of work. Minimal yet  full of surprises.  Some exceptional synth work. Your voice reminded me of Marianne Faithful who I absolutely love. A great listen  :)
Title: Re: The Mirror of Fear Tales
Post by: moraamarolaloba on October 13, 2018, 01:06:26 PM
Quote from: pompeyjazz on October 12, 2018, 10:16:04 PM
This absolutely mesmerized me Mora. It's a very clever piece of work. Minimal yet  full of surprises.  Some exceptional synth work. Your voice reminded me of Marianne Faithful who I absolutely love. A great listen  :)

Wow! Thank you very much. I enjoy experimenting with synth loops from Logic and creating my own sounds.
The wonderful guitar/sound is a contribution of Marcus Nalgaber
Title: Re: The Mirror of Fear Tales
Post by: Neil C on November 19, 2018, 09:41:54 PM
Yes lots to like here with the atmospheric vibe
cool
 :)
neil
Title: Re: The Mirror of Fear Tales
Post by: rightly on November 21, 2018, 04:15:12 PM
very gentle
I really like the relaxed groove.
Jazzy n clubby
thanks for sharing
Title: Re: The Mirror of Fear Tales
Post by: moraamarolaloba on November 21, 2018, 05:29:22 PM
@Rightly (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=20219)
@Neil C (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=18856)

Many thanks!