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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Works in Progress => Topic started by: jonlint on September 09, 2018, 06:19:01 PM
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Hi all,
Wrote this song - something in a different vein for me. Feedback welcome:
https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3/life
LIFE
(Words by Jonathan Linton, Music by Jonathan Linton)
Playing to loose
The game of life
Taken from granted
Until the fight
A player looses
Empty space
Never filled
That one last embrace
Of Life
Life
The game of life
Frame in picture
Froze in time
Sadness eternal
Memory sublime
Always there
Empty space
Never filled
That one last embrace
Of Life
Life
The game of life
The guiding hand
Throughout my life
Made me win
But lost fight
Love forever
Never erase
Remember ‘till
That one last embrace
Of Life
Life
The game of life