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Title: The "Get Shorty" Contest - Results Are In!!
Post by: Paulski on August 12, 2018, 02:20:40 AM
@pompeyjazz (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=20269) and myself are pleased to launch the "Get Shorty" Song Contest.  :D :D
So get out your paring knives and cut, cut, cut your 8 minute masterpiece to 60 seconds or so (i.e. only keep the best parts  :o)
Here are the rules:

- any genre/style/theme/mood/vibe/speed
- may enter as solo, or additionally, as part of maximum one collab.
- no voting for your own song!
- entrants must vote at the end of the contest or face disqualification of their entry
- Sept. 30th, 2018 midnight is the deadline for submissions
- To enter, post your song in the Finished songs section and PM @pompeyjazz (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=20269) or @Paulski (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=19241) and we'll add the link to this thread.

Who says size matters?
Get Shorty!

Here are the contestants:

The Lizards of Silicon Valley (https://soundcloud.com/mickyplankton/the-lizards-of-silicon-valley) - Micky Plankton
Always in a Hurry (https://soundcloud.com/caliamoko/always-in-a-hurry/s-By4Av)  - CaliaMoko
Too Hot To Move (https://soundcloud.com/caliamoko/too-hot-to-move/s-z9MFG) - collab Jzr171/CaliaMoko
Project 1 Minute (https://soundcloud.com/skub1955/project-1-minute) - Skub
Sweetest Little Melody (https://soundcloud.com/t-j-boswell/sweetest-little-melody) - tboswell
Oranges (https://soundcloud.com/pompeyjazz/oranges) - pompeyjazz
Demons Within (https://soundcloud.com/neilconnor-2/demons-within-part-1-master-demo-22-sept-2018) - Neil C
Click Bait (https://soundcloud.com/paulcanuck/click-bait-one-minute) - collab Paulski/pompeyjazz
Keys to the Kingdom (https://soundcloud.com/paulcanuck/keys-to-the-kingdom) - Paulski
I'll Find The Time (https://soundcloud.com/cramer1930/ill-find-the-time) - Viscount Cramer & His Orchestra
A Little bit of a Rush (https://soundcloud.com/binladeda/a-little-bit-of-a-rush-1) - Binladeda
Suspend My Karma! (https://soundcloud.com/crystalsuzy/suspend-my-karma) - crystalsuzy
I Wanna Be Your Girlfriend (https://soundcloud.com/jack-simmons-1/i-wanna-be-your-girlfriend-get-shorty-song-content-entry) - jacksimmons



Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: Paulski on August 12, 2018, 02:29:51 AM
The ballots have been counted and recounted every which way imaginable so pomp and I are pretty sure we counted them right, and if we didn't, well who's to know?  ;D Anyhoo without pontificating further here are the winners -
A BIG CONGRATULATIONS to them, and all who entered!!

First prize goes to : tboswell - Sweetest Little Melody

Second place to: Skub - Project 1 Minute

Third goes to: pompeyjazz - Oranges

Fourth awarded to: jacksimmons - I Wanna Be Your Girlfriend

And a fifth of scotch for: Neil C - Demons Within
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: pompeyjazz on August 17, 2018, 07:28:49 AM
Bump, bump, bump - Who's up for this one ?

Any creations taking shape ?

It's a tricky remit to cram all those ideas into 1 minute  :)
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: mickyplankton on August 17, 2018, 07:56:38 AM
im very excited about this competition and ive written a song especially for it. its currently playing in my head at the moment. the music is nailed and im about 50% through the lyric process. Hope to do an acoustic demo over the weekend. Will put in Works in Progress initially.
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: Paulski on August 17, 2018, 01:36:32 PM
Any creations taking shape ?

Yeah - where are all those "I got mine done already", "done and dusted", "what's takin' you guys so long?" folks now eh?

All hat and no horse!  ;D ;D (all flat and no chorus?  :o)
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: CaliaMoko on August 17, 2018, 02:37:53 PM
I think I mentioned I'm part of a collaboration in this challenge. The original song we were going to use has turned out to be too long, so we've written a new one which is now in production. It's getting close to done but, because of circumstances sort of beyond our control, it will likely be at least another two weeks before it is done. So it's coming.

I suspect, with a deadline so far in the future, some people are procrastinating due to the illusion there is "plenty of time"!
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: Paulski on August 17, 2018, 02:45:09 PM
I think I mentioned I'm part of a collaboration in this challenge. The original song we were going to use has turned out to be too long, so we've written a new one which is now in production. It's getting close to done but, because of circumstances sort of beyond our control, it will likely be at least another two weeks before it is done. So it's coming.

I suspect, with a deadline so far in the future, some people are procrastinating due to the illusion there is "plenty of time"!
Take your time Vicky - I'm just yankin' your chain!  ;D ;D
Mine is going to take a while too..
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: Bill Saunders on August 17, 2018, 05:16:26 PM
Good bump...zero ideas, no idea where to start, not a clue. But we’ve got six weeks to do something that lasts a minute. How hard is that?!
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: Viscount Cramer & His Orchestra on August 17, 2018, 05:31:10 PM
I've got 2 songs done but only started working on one of them. For this one I will need to collab with a female jazz vocal or it will not see the light of day. The other is my second string effort which I will sing so that should be done in time.
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: Paulski on August 17, 2018, 05:44:55 PM
Forgot to mention that it must contain an intro, at least 2 verses, three choruses, a bridge, a solo and an outro.

JUST KIDDING!!  ;D ;D
(you don't need to have an outro  ;D)
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: Skub on August 18, 2018, 10:16:14 AM
Yeah, I did all that Paul.

My track is actually 10 minutes long,but I put 10 compressors on the stereo out channel,which brings it down to 1 minute.

Cool trick eh?  8)
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: Binladeda on August 22, 2018, 11:01:50 AM

 Hey Guys  ;D ;D

 Great idea....I'm up for it  ;D ;D

 I'm away atm......full time grandad duties, while my daughter has another one  ;D ;D
 I'll be back amongst you after she's given birth and the other one is back at school. 
 It's hard to focus on music right now, so a minute is just about right  ;D ;D

 Wasn't there a Minute Waltz....or something like that ?   ;)

Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: Paulski on August 22, 2018, 01:21:29 PM
Glad to have you on board @Binladeda (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=18620) - and congrats/good luck on the new grandchild  ;D
I've got 5 of the little ankle-biters now and they're great to see  ;D

I just have to add a drum solo and the 5 min organ interlude to my entry  :D
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: tboswell on August 30, 2018, 11:50:56 AM
I think I have a candidate for this comp, which is a great little idea!

Just need to record it.
You know the drill, hours and hours of work compressed into 60secs of music.... ;D
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: adamfarr on August 31, 2018, 09:44:46 PM
Am still alive. This could be my come back. Vamos!
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: pompeyjazz on August 31, 2018, 10:01:22 PM
Welcome back Senor. C'est pas simple!
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: Paulski on September 03, 2018, 05:00:05 PM
OMG!
OMFG!!


It's September!
Better get shorty started!!
;D ;D ;D :o :o 8) 8) :-\ :-\
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: Skub on September 06, 2018, 09:48:39 PM
Is it possible to have a list on entries on this thread,updated as they appear? Sometimes stuff can be overlooked in amongst the regular tracks in finished songs.

That way simpletons such as moi have a point of reference.  :)
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: pompeyjazz on September 06, 2018, 10:54:59 PM
On the  case man. I will be making transatlantic contact with my co-host and getting everything up to date  ;)
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: Paulski on September 07, 2018, 12:55:14 AM

The list is in the top post. There are only two entries so far - I think!
Well, actually I seldom think but that's another story  :D
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: jacksimmons on September 09, 2018, 04:48:02 PM
Is this competition still going? Is there a solid deadline?

Think I have something for it in the works

EDIT: nvm I actually READ the post properly. I'm game!
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: pompeyjazz on September 09, 2018, 05:19:17 PM
Hi Jackie.  Yeah, game on. End of the month for submissions  :)
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: Paulski on September 11, 2018, 08:54:53 PM
Now up to four entries!  ;D ;D
Come on folks I know you can come up short too  8) 8)
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: Paulski on September 15, 2018, 07:15:14 PM
Now up to five shorty's !!
See top post this thread.  ;D ;D
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: ScottLevi on September 17, 2018, 08:11:07 PM
Hey Heeey!

Looking forward to giving these a proper listening to, the one's I've heard so far have been excellent.

I've gone a little rogue whilst Darren's on holiday and been tweaking something that had been on the back-burner for this, so a DNMC entry will be coming! :)

Probably a better one for the bar, doubt there's too many examples, but the subject matter reminded me of this 50 second jam which shows up on my favourite White Stripes album
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: pompeyjazz on September 17, 2018, 09:13:52 PM
That White Stripes track is infectious @ScottLevi (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=20495) .One of my favourite albums as well  :)
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: Neil C on September 18, 2018, 10:34:13 PM
Hi,
I hope to be there, got the little ditty just need to record the small wee thingy.
:-)
neil
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: crystalsuzy on September 20, 2018, 12:41:59 AM
I have one that's a minute and 14 sec. Does it need to be exactly 1 min?
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: Bill Saunders on September 20, 2018, 08:37:29 AM
Despite my promises, I don’t think I’ll get around to recording a shorty...a lifetime of listening to prog doesn’t help my ability in this area.

But wow, the standard of the entries is absolutely amazing - well done to all!
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: Paulski on September 20, 2018, 01:24:48 PM
I have one that's a minute and 14 sec. Does it need to be exactly 1 min?
I think 1:14 meets the rule "60 seconds or so" for entry.
Whether the esteemed reviewers judge it harshly is another matter ;D

Paul
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: Paulski on September 23, 2018, 02:41:13 PM
Now up to eight entries!
Eight!

One week left to go - you can do it!!  ;D ;D
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: cowparsleyman on September 26, 2018, 08:24:57 AM
Hi @Paulski (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=19241)

I might do an entry, but am I too late?, as you list the contestants, rather implies that the competition is closed.

Rich
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: pompeyjazz on September 26, 2018, 09:48:06 AM
Hi @cowparsleyman (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=21308) submission date is 30th September so you've got plenty of time  :)
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: cowparsleyman on September 26, 2018, 12:42:24 PM
Hi @pompeyjazz (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=20269) - Thanks for letting me know, there are some really cool entries, yours for example, (just had an orange for my lunch) I fancy doing something out of my comfort zone...I have absolutely no idea what it'll be....lets see if I get some time this weekend...

Thanks for letting me know PJ

cpm
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: Paulski on September 28, 2018, 04:14:45 PM
More new entries (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?topic=15745.0)!!  ;D ;D
We've now got more than you can shake a (short) stick at!!  ;D ;D


Two more days!
You can do it!
We're all pullin' for ya!
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: crystalsuzy on September 29, 2018, 12:02:18 PM
I just entered a song. Hopefully I made the deadline :o :o
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: Paulski on September 29, 2018, 02:09:25 PM
I just entered a song. Hopefully I made the deadline :o :o
Hi Suzy - great to have you back! You're now on the list - good luck!  ;D
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: jacksimmons on September 29, 2018, 11:31:07 PM
I have posted my submission!
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: pompeyjazz on September 30, 2018, 09:25:41 PM
Around 3 hours to go to get your songs in before the doors slam shut guys. I will be consulting with @Paulski (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=19241) to clarify the voting procedure and how the hell  we're going to be able to count all those votes when there's only the two of us. To all who have entered a huge "Thank You" to all of you who are still sweating to get that one minute classic finished, get on with it  :) See you all at the awards ceremony  ;D
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Song Contest
Post by: Paulski on October 16, 2018, 08:48:41 PM
The ballots have been counted and recounted every which way imaginable so pomp and I are pretty sure we counted them right, and if we didn't, well who's to know?  ;D Anyhoo without pontificating further here are the winners -
A BIG CONGRATULATIONS to them, and all who entered!!

First prize goes to : tboswell - Sweetest Little Melody

Second place to: Skub - Project 1 Minute

Third goes to: pompeyjazz - Oranges

Fourth awarded to: jacksimmons - I Wanna Be Your Girlfriend

And a fifth of scotch for: Neil C - Demons Within


Special thanks to my partner in crime pompeyjazz for co-hosting and our non-contestant voters - you know who you are!!
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Contest - Results Are In!!
Post by: MichaelA on October 16, 2018, 09:10:21 PM
Congratulations @tboswell (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=20223) and all runners up. Very imaginative list of front running songs there, and a worthy winner!  ;D
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Contest - Results Are In!!
Post by: Bill Saunders on October 16, 2018, 10:09:12 PM
Although I didn’t enter, I enjoyed these songs so much and I honestly think I could listen to an album’s worth of one-minute wonders. I couldn’t write 40 or 50 one minute songs though - I find it’s hard enough coming up with song ideas, and when I do, I need to do it justice for three or four minutes at least! Now, there are some very prolific writers on the forum - how about an album’s worth chaps?! You know who you are!!
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Contest - Results Are In!!
Post by: CaliaMoko on October 17, 2018, 12:43:51 AM
I enjoyed this challenge very much!

Congratulations to the
Cream of the Crop!
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Contest - Results Are In!!
Post by: jacksimmons on October 17, 2018, 04:43:21 PM
Flattered! Thanks to all who voted and those who hosted. Worthy winners!
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Contest - Results Are In!!
Post by: tboswell on October 18, 2018, 10:13:46 PM
Wow!! Thanks all. So many great and imaginative entries!

And big thanks to @Paulski (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=19241) and @pompeyjazz (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=20269) for hosting such a great comp!

Tom.
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Contest - Results Are In!!
Post by: crystalsuzy on October 19, 2018, 01:19:42 PM
Congrats @tboswell (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=20223) and the runners up  :o  And well done to everyone who entered and of course a BIG thanks to Paul and John for hosting 8)

I totally enjoyed listening to each and every 1min song entered  8) A BIG success all round :)

PS Now well the next comp be to write a 10min prog-rock?  ;D ;D ;D
Title: Re: The "Get Shorty" Contest - Results Are In!!
Post by: cowparsleyman on October 28, 2018, 03:00:45 PM
Congrats to all.

cpm