Hi,
Get what you're saying. All done with your languid vocals it has own charm.
I think I found the drums a bit busy for my taste..
a grower
:)
neil
Really like this, Rightly. The music is memorable, the lyrics are compelling, and the spoken vocals are really cool. I can't find anything to criticize.
Hello Rightly
The vocal delivery is not a style that I particularly enjoy, but as you say, you have achieved what you wanted, and I can here the "quiet confidence" for sure. So the fact that it is not my "thing" vocals wise, is irrelevant.
What I really do like, is the brass instrumentation, which carries the song along really, really well. Perhaps the drums could have done with a little more variation.
Good stuff, well done
Bill
Really like this, Rightly. The music is memorable, the lyrics are compelling, and the spoken vocals are really cool. I can't find anything to criticize.
Thanks Redrhodie
I'm glad you like it.
I'll send you another link.
Really like this, Rightly. The music is memorable, the lyrics are compelling, and the spoken vocals are really cool. I can't find anything to criticize.
Thanks Redrhodie
I'm glad you like it.
I'll send you another link.
Another link? Did you send me one before?
I wish I could appreciate Joni Mitchell. She was ruined by too many plays over too many years at a job I used to have. I know she's brilliant but I still can't listen to her voice. She actually used to come in to that shop.
I absolutely understand some people might have the same reaction to my voice. Haha. It's nothing personal against her. She seemed like a nice person.
Hi,
The music is good, but the tempo is too slow or dragging for my taste.
I agree the others, the drums could have little more variation.
Nothing else I want to criticise, well done!
refusedrevival
Hi Rightly
I remember these lyrics - great stuff IMO.
This is hypnotic musically and really pushes the title/hook - which works for me. :)
I liked the vox - couldn't hear it any other way - very unique IMO
Solid work
Paul
Hi Rightly,
Great vocals, loved the arrangement especially the horns. This reminded me of 80's indie pop which is a very good thing. The song is brilliantly put together and so original with some lovely warm touches. I loved the drums BTW.
I have no nits - this is such a bleedin' brilliant piece - I absolutely loved it.
M