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Title: THEY'RE ALL IN IT
Post by: Misanthropist on May 10, 2018, 10:10:18 AM
THEY'RE ALL IN IT



That dude in the superman suit's got a lingering sneeze

he's scouting for us while we go where we please

as his mother squeals but still sucks his snot

and the plot to wrong this song is all she's got

She says there's no time for half bake deja vu's

no time for talking about that not so young cruise

they're all in it and ready to go home

along with bonsai people in that diamond dome

They're all in it


My precious girl just made a few mountains move

I wasn't behind them I didn't break her groove

and I'm getting out of here without a way out gag

I'm meeting a pancake tosser who's lost his rag

He's in a public house it's public holiday

moaning no woman ever looks his way

they're all in it and ready to go home

along with bonsai people in that diamond dome

They're all in it
Title: Re: THEY'RE ALL IN IT
Post by: Vintage54 on May 12, 2018, 08:17:32 PM

  Howdy,
     I don't really know what to say about this my friend, because i haven't the foggiest idea what it's about. Maybe it's just nonsense verse, but that's ok, i've got room for that. Had to post some kind of reply though because it's not afraid to be different. It's strange and kinda grotesque, but so is life, and i can't help liking it.

                                       Vintage54
Title: Re: THEY'RE ALL IN IT
Post by: Misanthropist on May 15, 2018, 09:54:08 AM
hi vintage I fear all verse is nonsense is people who treat it with delusional pride I do
thanks a lot for considering my lyrics