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Songwriter Forum => The Writing Process => Topic started by: Miss Stagefright on May 08, 2018, 02:53:13 PM

Title: I have a chorus…maybe…I guess…
Post by: Miss Stagefright on May 08, 2018, 02:53:13 PM

Locked away in the dark
One more day, one more mark
Locked away in solitude
A life of servitude



Idk what the story is so if you've got any suggestions, I'm all ears
Thanks--

Title: Re: I have a chorus…maybe…I guess…
Post by: pompeyjazz on May 08, 2018, 03:17:54 PM

It could be about modern slavery I guess

Title: Re: I have a chorus…maybe…I guess…
Post by: Skub on May 08, 2018, 06:03:21 PM

Make it about Elizabeth Fritzl?

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fritzl_case

Title: Re: I have a chorus…maybe…I guess…
Post by: redrhodie on May 08, 2018, 06:31:34 PM

She's been married to him forever and he doesn't really know her. He hasn't listened to her for so long that she doesn't bother to tell him how sad and alone she feels. She watches the days, months, and years passing, hoping for someone to come and save her, because she doesn't know how to leave.

Title: Re: I have a chorus…maybe…I guess…
Post by: Katie Wilson on May 15, 2018, 01:00:27 AM

Hi it's how I feel sometimes when I can't be Katie xxx

Title: Re: I have a chorus…maybe…I guess…
Post by: Davino on May 21, 2018, 03:36:25 AM

Maybe she has been missing an ex and wishes that the sunlight will caress her again with the reignition of the love they had?