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Title: The Butterflies Matinee (A Bagatelle)
Post by: Rousseaunian John on April 20, 2018, 10:11:31 PM

My very first complete composition. Making music is a hobby to me and I didn't intend to produce a track the faithful day it came to life. It is the result of an improv. Nevertheless, I think it qualifies as good.

Title: Re: The Butterflies Matinee (A Bagatelle)
Post by: PaulyX on April 21, 2018, 08:45:30 PM

Hello Arthur, welcome.  Thanks for posting.
I was kind of drawn in by your track, but I don't 'get it'.  With no lyrics, no obvious structure and no repeating melody, it's very free form and I'm not sure what it is expressing.  It was still sort of hypnotic and enjoyable though.  What does it mean to you?