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Title: Second Face - Alt. Rock Ballad
Post by: jonlint on December 21, 2017, 03:38:05 PM

Hi all,

After a long writing pause I wanted to write an acoustic guitar ballad - something I never did.  It ended up sounding a bit like my favourite acoustic ballad of all time - Follow the Sun Down from Dark New Day.  Feedback welcome before I fine tune it, write lyrics or can it if you think it sucks!

https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3/second-face-demo

Title: Re: Second Face - Alt. Rock Ballad
Post by: Darren1664 on December 21, 2017, 06:19:51 PM

The sound of this is great! It has a real powerful feel to it - nice wide guitar, bass and some punchy drums! And that guitar solo is brilliant

I think you're good to go

Thanks

Darren

Title: Re: Second Face - Alt. Rock Ballad
Post by: rightly on December 25, 2017, 01:56:21 AM

This sounds good to me. I don't know the song you refer to.
It's hard for me to imagine a vocal melody, this is something I'm not familiar with.
I like the music a lot.
Good luck.