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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: sabre on December 13, 2017, 11:59:57 AM

Title: Our bands new Indie demo. Please have a listen!
Post by: sabre on December 13, 2017, 11:59:57 AM
https://soundcloud.com/user-135348204/back-where-we-belong-by-essexlondon-band-sabre
Title: Re: Our bands new Indie demo. Please have a listen!
Post by: S.T.C on December 13, 2017, 12:43:41 PM
Yeah it's a good song, it didnt get boring for me, but i think it needs more of a hook, sounds like a song that you might stick on the end of an album , just to see it off..if you understand what i mean...but nice work all the same.
Title: Re: Our bands new Indie demo. Please have a listen!
Post by: 2tuoo on December 13, 2017, 02:13:11 PM
the song is great!

I would invest more time into production value, the song feels compressed in the instrumentals and the vocals are EQed to the midrange and this makes me feel like I'm listening to a song played from a stereo in someone's car nearby
Title: Re: Our bands new Indie demo. Please have a listen!
Post by: Mikey on December 13, 2017, 07:48:41 PM
I like the song, and the vocal style fits well, and there is some nice playing in there apart from a few timing issues, it does need proper production, and it needs to have a stand out chorus, but overall it has a lot of potential.

Well done guys, Mikey