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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Works in Progress => Topic started by: wkamen on December 08, 2017, 05:41:44 PM
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When summer ended
And winter came
There were days
When the breeze was so cold
And the sun was so distant
That my body became dormant
Waiting, longing for love.
As time slowed,a song came to mind
That takes me back in time
To a summer place
When I first saw you on that beach
swaying' to the sound of the waves
Every time I hear that song
I think about you and get high
on your memory
Strange how a song sounds like a memory
like a recording of a summers day
on that beach
somewhere only we know.
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I really like the start of this song. So descriptive bout how we feel when summer turns to winter.