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Title: einhorn
Post by: rightly on September 07, 2017, 10:38:47 PM
i put this together for a condom company
i'm quite hesitant with mixing n mastering
i don't really trust myself

Einhorn
is a german word, means unicorn

feedback welcome

https://soundcloud.com/rightly/unicorny-3
Title: Re: einhorn
Post by: Silver Machine on September 09, 2017, 11:30:02 PM
Dude I just had to hear how you write music for a condom commercial!
Well it didnt give me a boner but it was pleasantly smooth and it actually sounded sorta feminine?
I was gonna say its catchy, but as condoms stop you catching anything, it wouldnt be right.
Man, that "Einhorn make magic happen" creased me up.
Yeah I reckon it could sell the things, definitely to women.