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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Works in Progress => Topic started by: Morefrog Jones on August 03, 2017, 09:47:17 PM

Title: WIP - No Win Situation
Post by: Morefrog Jones on August 03, 2017, 09:47:17 PM
Well life has been getting in the way big time recently >:(
So need some inspiration to finish this one off

I'm not sure where i'm going with this one  - its just a part song totally unfinished

I think its got a bit of potential - any views appreciated.

https://soundcloud.com/morefrog-jones/no-win-situation-part-demo-snippet
Title: Re: WIP - No Win Situation
Post by: pompeyjazz on August 03, 2017, 10:37:29 PM
Yo Mo Pompey Fo. Difficult posting stuff in wip section as hardly anyone listens to it. I would love to work on this it's got such a great feel. I've got an idea of where this is going to. If you're into it pm me . Blue Disney Army  ;D
Title: Re: WIP - No Win Situation
Post by: Morefrog Jones on August 03, 2017, 10:42:09 PM
Yo Mo Pompey Fo. Difficult posting stuff in wip section as hardly anyone listens to it. I would love to work on this it's got such a great feel. I've got an idea of where this is going to. If you're into it pm me . Blue Disney Army  ;D

Thats great - I will contact you in the morning...PUP ;)
Title: Re: WIP - No Win Situation
Post by: pompeyjazz on August 03, 2017, 10:58:28 PM
Deal  :) Well up for it. Pompfunktasticheers  ;D
Title: Re: WIP - No Win Situation
Post by: Darren1664 on August 06, 2017, 03:25:42 PM
You have the carcass here of a cool tune! Great rhythm and funk guitars. I like the vocal melody too - a bit of production and some BV's will really lift this. I'm guessing you and Pompey are tirelessly working on this - look forward to the end result!