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Songwriter Forum => Lyrics => Topic started by: Jackdaw on June 08, 2017, 10:15:58 PM
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ANDY MURRAY
My hero within the Tennis World is Sir Andy Murray.
I follow him and his matches all the time.
I admire him for where he has got to nowadays from such humble beginnings.
Including that of Dunblane?
So I wrote this ode in tribute to the World's Number One tennis player.
ANDY MURRAY
You hear his 'Roar'
And his grunts and groans
You feel his passion and desire,
He is never a 'Bore'
And often moans,
But in Tennis no one's higher.
You sit and watch
Play his every shot
You applaud his magical flurry,
His presence on Court
Is that of a Legend
And his name is Andy Murray.
Jackdaw1888 :-)
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Apparently his Fan club love my words.
As do his major sponsors Under Amour.
Is there any budding singist come songwriter out there who would be willing to put such lyrics to music?
With a HighLands theme of course!!!
Jackdaw1888 :-)
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Let's go Rafa and Muguruza!
Just joking, cool lyrics.
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Let's go Rafa and Muguruza!
Just joking, cool lyrics.
Rafa is defo the King of Clay.
He grew up on it.
However he cannot handle grass.
Muguruza is a promising talent.
She will do well on Tour me thinks.
But Murray will remain in our hearts and minds for many a year.
Because of his childhood in Dunblane and his never say die attitude.
For both Tennis and Queen/Country!!!
Jackdaw1888 :-)
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Hi,
Thant put a smile on my face, It needs a chorus and probably an last verse?
For the chorus maybe his name repeated three times with a final line, although my feeble brain can only think of Hurry to rhyme >:(
:)
Neil
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Thanks for that Jack. Put a smile on my face too!! Although I did read the first section as though they were lyrics, thought the flow was maybe not quite there and then realised you were still introducing the lyrics :P my fault for being a numpty.
Thanks for sharing!
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Hi,
Thant put a smile on my face, It needs a chorus and probably an last verse?
For the chorus maybe his name repeated three times with a final line, although my feeble brain can only think of Hurry to rhyme >:(
:)
Neil
Cheers Neil C.
I kinda agree.
And I will work on it.
Regards
Jackdaw :-)
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Hi,
Thant put a smile on my face, It needs a chorus and probably an last verse?
For the chorus maybe his name repeated three times with a final line, although my feeble brain can only think of Hurry to rhyme >:(
:)
Neil
As for a Chorus???...
It would have to include the chant of his fans which is...
Let's Go Andy, Let's Go!!!
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ANDY MURRAY
My hero within the Tennis World is Sir Andy Murray.
I follow him and his matches all the time.
I admire him for where he has got to nowadays from such humble beginnings.
Including that of Dunblane?
So I wrote this ode in tribute to the World's Number One tennis player.
ANDY MURRAY
You hear his 'Roar'
And his grunts and groans
You feel his passion and desire,
He is never a 'Bore'
And often moans,
But in Tennis no one's higher.
You sit and watch
Play his every shot
You applaud his magical flurry,
His presence on Court
Is that of a Legend
And his name is Andy Murray!!!
He plays within an Era
They are known as the Fab Four
With Rafa, Feds and Djoker
Muzza often goes to war.
He is a Brit
And proud of it
Once knighted by his Queen
His sweat and tears
His nerves and fears
The whole wide World has seen.
Jackdaw1888 :-)