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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: mickyplankton on February 21, 2017, 01:52:54 PM
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Hi all,
This song is a bit of a back to basics approach from me. Its a stripped down 2 minute garage rock song that is deliberately minimalist.
Lyrically, it is also intended to be open to interpretation.
It could be a song about the glorious fragility of humanity against the backdrop of an infinite and unknowable universe.... or.... it could be about nothing at all......
The lyrics are:
Guadaladaloops....on repeat.
https://soundcloud.com/mickyplankton/guadaladaloops
Thanks for listening and feeding back.
Micky.
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Punk - catchy - slightly mad - works for me! :)
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Really don't know what to make of it. I think I'm on "stun". Intriguing at the very least. Don't think I can do the feedback thing, though. Wouldn't know what to say.... ??? ;D
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I, er....I don...hmm
It rhymes!
For me the timing would need tightening up on the instrumental track but I guess punk isn't really about precision.
I'm not sure what else to say.
You sounded like you enjoyed yourself so keep at it.
Yodasdad.
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I love the twist at the end with the lyrics - didn't expect that
I have no idea how to review this song - punk is meant to be low fi so the production being rough around the edges isn't the end of the world but I think that's the only thing I could recommend
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Hahahaha I love it, a big part of music for me is the emotional effect they have, and this put a massive smile on my face. The "1-2-3-4 -" then drop bits are my fave
Nothing wrong with this at all, and its punk enough not to give a shi* that's it gibberish.
All the best,
Scott
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Always up for a song that has more chords than words ... could be a great show opener like the Hives' "Come On". I'd keep it to about one minute long for maximum effect though...
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Love it. Love it. Love it. I don't know what else to say really. It's punk rock.
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Hi
Neat
I wonder if you could post the lyrics?
:)
Neil
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Great stuff Micky. Does what it says on the tin. Great fun and lots of attitude. Does it for me
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Jesus H Christ!
I went to sleep singing guadaladaloops and now I've woke up with it in my head too!
You've done something right but I swear to god if my next song has a line like 'eat a lot of soup' or something in it, I'm coming for you Micky!
Yodasdad.
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Yo Micky.
You're as mad as a bottle of chips.
But in a good way. :D
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Listened to two posted songs in the last 5 mins, and I'm truly back in my youth. This is absolutely pure, simple, unadulterated fun, and it could seriously go viral. Needs some production, but the song's done.
Mike
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somehow refreshing for my ear
I've been busy trying to make sense of things lately
lol
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Hi,
Melodically, musically and lyrically refreshing...beyond criticism (and reason! :)) and an earworm to boot!
Loved it
Cheers Phil
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Made me laugh - in a good way. :)
Ridiculously silly and catchy in a genre I love - John Peel would have loved it!!!
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Totally out there crazy and totally catchy, bit rough around the extremities but hey..it's punk!! 8) 8)
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hey everyone thanks for the curiosity or love of this tune. Means a lot, especially from the likes of you all! Sorry to Yoda (ha ha loved your comment) or anyone else that has been a little unhinged by it! 😀😀
Cheers Micky
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Great punker song. ;D ;D
Now go out and create a breakfast cereal with that name and make a million.
cheers
Paul
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Bonkers! ??? ;)
Jamie