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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Works in Progress => Topic started by: leanne1994 on November 19, 2016, 02:29:07 AM
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Hi guys, I'm currently in progress of writing lyrics for my first song.
(Go easy on me! (: )
I'm going through a tough time in my life right now, so the lost girl is describing me.
She's just a lost girl at shore,
Knows she deserves so much more.
She bottles everything up inside,
Feeling scared, nowhere to hide.
So sick and tired of this tough love,
This isn't what she's been dreaming of.
They tell her to wear a pretty smile,
But I guess a fake one will do for now.
Mermaid kisses for you my dear,
Soon you'll have no reason to hide from fear.
You never know what you'll find hidden at the bottom of the ocean,
Treasure chests, filled with diamonds and devotion.