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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: tammynone on September 22, 2016, 04:21:41 PM
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Hi, so i have put up 2 recordings, the main one i want feedback on is "pocket of sunshine" because the other one hasn't been mastered.
So i was going for a feel good r&b/pop tune, let me know what u think of it. Thanks.
https://soundcloud.com/tammy-none/pocket-of-sunshine-tammynone24googlemailcom-copyright-contact-tammy-none
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Hi tammynone.
I'm not trying to be rude, but I recommend you read the guidelines (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?topic=2564.0). One song is allowed per 14 days, and you need to post the lyrics.
I did listen to part of the song, but I can't understand all the words, so I'll wait until you post the lyrics before I listen to the rest and give any feedback.
Welcome to the forums! I think you'll like it here. We have a very nice and friendly community. Why not hop over to the introductions (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?board=17.0) forum and tell us a little about yourself?
Vicki
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Hi,
Well I enjoyed this gentle peice of R&B, it all skanks along to a great groove, and does make you feel happy.
Re the forum its a bit of give and take, the more you review and help others the more you'll get back in return.
:)
Neil
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Hey !
I don't understand, is it something already on radios ?
It sounds f**** professional with a lot of groovy stuff...
The voice seems to be a mix between adult and child, it's so strange...
:o
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Beautiful tune.
Excellent production....is that you singing too?
Sandeep
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Hi Tammy. Very pro. How did you do that ? Catchy little number