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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: Toby on June 13, 2016, 07:46:55 PM

Title: I've Got
Post by: Toby on June 13, 2016, 07:46:55 PM

Hi guys! :)
I'm new here and I' ll appreciate all comments about my new song (just instrumental).

Here it is:
https://soundcloud.com/user-18600795/ive-got

Just express your feelings :)

Have a nice day :)

Title: Re: I've Got
Post by: Movin Flavour on June 22, 2016, 09:30:18 PM

Toby

A good tune and you play the piano/ synths real well.

It needs a bit of variation, as I feel it sits at the same level for most of the song.

A,good effort.

Sandeep

( I suggest you review other songs on the forum if you want more reviews)

Sandeep

Title: Re: I've Got
Post by: Oldbutyet on June 26, 2016, 10:58:11 PM

Welcome   8)

Title: Re: I've Got
Post by: Oldbutyet on June 27, 2016, 10:58:20 PM

Okay you need to drop in level bring in a little breathing space if you know what i mean but this is all guessing game, what are you looking for.

Before you're forgotten.