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Songwriter Forum => Collaborations => Topic started by: Stylus on September 01, 2013, 11:55:22 PM
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Hi Wondrous,songwritin',music makin, peepz Heres a special something which evolved due to the charmingly debonair gentlman Mr.PAT FEELEY who also is known to most of you as:DOGMAX.
Pat sent me a Song called: Aint that a shame & asked me to Stylusify that track & on playing around with the idea of a young Pat feeley chasing after his love(now his wife) we came up with this song:Skydivin........Fallin for you. I'm hoping he will eventually sing the song & well till he does?
heres my demo as a guide for Pat to complete the task ;D He is a naughty pineapple & I have warned
him I will send him to Siberia if he dont get this done Lol. ;D ;D ;D ;D
Skydivin Dogmax/Stylus COLLABORATION
Take me to your party,I'll be dancin' with you
You look a million dollars,thats not far from the truth
I wanna make you mine,so sweet,Oh I fancy you
kissin' & a huggin' till the party is through........
I see a majic sparkle & its coming from you
I wanna spend my life wanna spend it with you......
Skydivin..........I'm fallin' for you.........
I'm skydivin..... I'm headin' for you.....
I see you everyday,good job,you live so close by
I wonder if you see me,with those beautiful eyes
I really want to tell you that youre so my desire
You take away my breath & now my heart is on fire
Every precious moment,so in love so it seems
Let me really tell you,Youre the girl of my dreams
Skydivin..........Etc...................
I want you to love me.....till the day.....that I die (till the day I die......)
I want you to fall for me... fall in love................ Head over heels
& fall in love ............Head over heels.............................................
Skydivin........Etc......................Fallin for you ( x2)
Pure magnetism,No hesitation,Pure adoration,No moderation
Its all affection,& yoiur perfection,& manifestion,Your attention
Skydivin........... Skydivin..........Skydivin........I'm fallin' for you..
HAPPY ANNIVERSARY MR & MRS PAT FEELEY Sincere best wishes Hug'zzz Stylus :)
http://soundcloud.com/stylus-barot/skydivin-stylus-dogmax
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oieeeeeee You lot! lazy gitz..... ;D ;D ;D ;D About time you commented on this song itzzzz for
DOGMAX. he,he,he,he STYLUS :)
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You should post it in the finished songs section :)
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Hi Jess This is only a guide vocal demo....to initially show DOGMAX how it goes...I sent him this as guide & also just the backing track but the lazy git wont sing it! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
Plus :'( :'( I cant post it on ' finished' as i still have a few day's before my 2 weeks ration allowance to post a new song is up..... :'( :'( :'( :'( booo hoooooo..... :'( :'( :'(
(Unless give the dogasong Dogmaximisizes his energies in singin it & uploads it????
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Well Stylus my friend
You done a great job with the words and music its been a pleasure working with you Mate and i know this wont be the last, as you know i did put my vocals to this but listening back i knew your vocals was just right for Skdivin, always what right for the song Mate you know that, puzzle as to why you post it here.
You're a good Mate Stylus.
Me and my Wife Ann says, Thank you so Much.
Haha just after reading your last post (give the dogasong) ;D woof woof ;D
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Hi Jess This is only a guide vocal demo....to initially show DOGMAX how it goes...I sent him this as guide & also just the backing track but the lazy git wont sing it! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
Plus :'( :'( I cant post it on ' finished' as i still have a few day's before my 2 weeks ration allowance to post a new song is up..... :'( :'( :'( :'( booo hoooooo..... :'( :'( :'(
(Unless give the dogasong Dogmaximisizes his energies in singin it & uploads it????
Hi Stylus...this is lovely...you could post it in the unfinished section so you'll get more reviews till your 2 weeks are up :) :) :) CS
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Hi Pat
I sincerely adore you my friend & from the moment this song was put to seed.I very much felt
that anything I did with this was a Gift to both you & Ann. HAPPY ANN-iversary :)
This song just would never have happened if I did not bump into you on this forum.You greatly inspired me & Your words & lovely story about your days down memory lane just led me into
Skydivin You know my humour.....but that aside I bladdee lov ya Dogmax but not like
Ann does....! he,he,he ;D ;D ;D
Ref: Puzzled why I put it here..? I thought collaboration...? Anyway regards to
You & Ann & Give yourself a Pat on the back! ;D ;D ;D Stylus :)
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Suze....................!
You are unbelievably my favourite human being on this planet! Without your help I'm just a guitar with no strings...... :) :) :) :) :) :)
Hug'zzz Thanx'zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz x Stylus :)
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Suze....................!
You are unbelievably my favourite human being on this planet! Without your help I'm just a guitar with no strings...... :) :) :) :) :) :)
Hug'zzz Thanx'zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz x Stylus :)
You are too funny Stylus ;D ;D You really do have a good sense of humour ;D ;D
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Suze....................!
You are unbelievably my favourite human being on this planet!
*cries hysterically* :'( :'( :'( IT'S NOT NICE TO HAVE FAVOURITES (unless it's me ;D) :'( :'( :'(
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Suze....................!
You are unbelievably my favourite human being on this planet!
*cries hysterically* :'( :'( :'( IT'S NOT NICE TO HAVE FAVOURITES (unless it's me ;D) :'( :'( :'(
( Stylus realises his mistake & cries historically & begs for forgivance & rectifies his mistake
only to get a smack on the head by Suze who pulled the plug out of stylus's ampli-fryer.... ) ;D
Jess you are believingly my most favourite human bean on this planet & also adjacent planets,
some which are not even discovered yet because everyones to busy writing & making music :)
oh & a hug'zzz to you Jess Stylus :)
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Suze....................!
You are unbelievably my favourite human being on this planet!
*cries hysterically* :'( :'( :'( IT'S NOT NICE TO HAVE FAVOURITES (unless it's me ;D) :'( :'( :'(
( Stylus realises his mistake & cries historically & begs for forgivance & rectifies his mistake
only to get a smack on the head by Suze who pulled the plug out of stylus's ampli-fryer.... ) ;D
Jess you are believingly my most favourite human bean on this planet & also adjacent planets,
some which are not even discovered yet because everyones to busy writing & making music :)
oh & a hug'zzz to you Jess Stylus :)
Thanks for taking the pressure off Jess :) ...it was getting hard to live up to ;D ;D ;D
hug'zzz to both of you :-* :-*
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Suze....................!
You are unbelievably my favourite human being on this planet!
*cries hysterically* :'( :'( :'( IT'S NOT NICE TO HAVE FAVOURITES (unless it's me ;D) :'( :'( :'(
( Stylus realises his mistake & cries historically & begs for forgivance & rectifies his mistake
only to get a smack on the head by Suze who pulled the plug out of stylus's ampli-fryer.... ) ;D
Jess you are believingly my most favourite human bean on this planet & also adjacent planets,
some which are not even discovered yet because everyones to busy writing & making music :)
oh & a hug'zzz to you Jess Stylus :)
Thanks for taking the pressure off Jess :) ...it was getting hard to live up to ;D ;D ;D
hug'zzz to both of you :-* :-*
HUGZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
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hey guys,
nice to hear this HAPPY ANNIVESARY this is what it's all about
really enjoyed this great title too, believe me pat is being modest
his voice is great, well done guys first of many, tony...
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Hi Benjo Yes Pat certainly is modest but he cant hide his talant thats for sure....why do you think I made friends with him? ;D he is a great role model...no correction....He is a Model & he has an individual style & distinctive voice. I truly admire him Cheerz Tony :)