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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: giitlesriddles on October 19, 2019, 06:11:09 PM
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Heyo
Check out this tune I'm performing with my band. It's kinda a real quick simple tune with some funky chords and not too many words.
The words are:
I think you got to get overyourself, have a laugh, have a drink
All the problems you got in your head would be gone if you didn't think
seems to me you need a release, every time you walk yea your're weal in the knees
If you wanna you can take it from me, If you steal them the best things in life come free
I think it's time you take your hands off of the wheel for a mile
you say to me you don't get the appeal and I nod and I smile
Seems to me like your havin a day, but if you listen to me it'll be ok
I think it's wise to make couple mistakes, because the worse the decision the better the story it makes.
Yea those are all the words, and their pretty reflective of my attitude freshman year of college (which was when I wrote them) . Anyway
It's just a fun quick little song, and I hope you enjoy!
Let me know any thoughts,
and have a great day!
Nate
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Funky track... there 's a lot of background noise in the vid so it is a bit hard to hear your vocal properly but I dug the chords and the instrumental breaks a lot, it certainly sounds like a crowd pleaser. It has a fusion kind of vibe to my ears, I can imagine it having wide appeal.