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Songwriter Forum => Lyrics => Topic started by: Jackdaw on May 26, 2017, 03:41:01 PM
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I have pierced my chest on a crown of thorn
As I perched upon His cross
My breast was singed by Fires of Hell
As I flew waters to the Lost.
The Postmen and Christmas cards
The Books and Poetry
Through your Winters and your Summertimes
I sing past and presently.
This is the real me
The real me.
Fly me
Fly me away through all the windchimes of your mind
I am the bird Red Robin
I soar the Wings of Time.
I herald Death flying through your door
To set your Spirit free
When I sit upon your garden spade
You smile as you spy me.
The Omens and your Folklore
Babes in Wood and Mystery
Through your Winters and your Summertimes
I sing past and presently.
This is the real me
The real me.
Fly me
Fly me away through all the windchimes of your mind
I am the bird Red Robin
I soar the Wings of Time.
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Jackdaw,
The words seem very good to me. Also very true to my situation as, at the sad occasion of my late daughter's funeral, a Robin flew around us. Within a short time, a Robin arrived in our garden and one has been resident ever since. It often flits and flies above us, and at the moment has another youngster with it, and they could almost settle on my hand. I take great comfort from this. A young girl serving in our music shop gave me a framed picture of 2 Robins because she remembered me telling her about the connection with my daughter. It was a lovely thing to do and so, Robins do hold a special place for me in my heart.
Thankyou for writing your words about the Robin
Marrianna (x in memory of my daughter R.I.P. loved so much)
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Jackdaw,
The words seem very good to me. Also very true to my situation as, at the sad occasion of my late daughter's funeral, a Robin flew around us. Within a short time, a Robin arrived in our garden and one has been resident ever since. It often flits and flies above us, and at the moment has another youngster with it, and they could almost settle on my hand. I take great comfort from this. A young girl serving in our music shop gave me a framed picture of 2 Robins because she remembered me telling her about the connection with my daughter. It was a lovely thing to do and so, Robins do hold a special place for me in my heart.
Thankyou for writing your words about the Robin
Marrianna (x in memory of my daughter R.I.P. loved so much)
Many thanks Marrianna for your comments.
I hope my ode n words will help to comfort you and yours and your loss X
My Dad died three days ago.
Robin Redbreast has been with Mankind since the Garden of Eve.
Take care
Best Wishes.
Jackdaw xxx
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Jackdaw,
The words seem very good to me. Also very true to my situation as, at the sad occasion of my late daughter's funeral, a Robin flew around us. Within a short time, a Robin arrived in our garden and one has been resident ever since. It often flits and flies above us, and at the moment has another youngster with it, and they could almost settle on my hand. I take great comfort from this. A young girl serving in our music shop gave me a framed picture of 2 Robins because she remembered me telling her about the connection with my daughter. It was a lovely thing to do and so, Robins do hold a special place for me in my heart.
Thankyou for writing your words about the Robin
Marrianna (x in memory of my daughter R.I.P. loved so much)
Many thanks Marrianna for your comments.
I hope my ode n words will help to comfort you and yours and your loss X
My Dad died three days ago.
Robin Redbreast has been with Mankind since the Garden of Eve.
Take care
Best Wishes.
Jackdaw xxx
Jackdaw,
I am so sorry for your loss. Writing words and music is very therapeutic, as I have found, whatever the subject. I hope that it will help you and thankyou for sharing your sad, recent news here.
Keep strong and writing your poems and lyrics too.
With All Good Wishes from
Marrianna x
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Jackdaw,
The words seem very good to me. Also very true to my situation as, at the sad occasion of my late daughter's funeral, a Robin flew around us. Within a short time, a Robin arrived in our garden and one has been resident ever since. It often flits and flies above us, and at the moment has another youngster with it, and they could almost settle on my hand. I take great comfort from this. A young girl serving in our music shop gave me a framed picture of 2 Robins because she remembered me telling her about the connection with my daughter. It was a lovely thing to do and so, Robins do hold a special place for me in my heart.
Thankyou for writing your words about the Robin
Marrianna (x in memory of my daughter R.I.P. loved so much)
Many thanks Marrianna for your comments.
I hope my ode n words will help to comfort you and yours and your loss X
My Dad died three days ago.
Robin Redbreast has been with Mankind since the Garden of Eve.
Take care
Best Wishes.
Jackdaw xxx
Jackdaw,
I am so sorry for your loss. Writing words and music is very therapeutic, as I have found, whatever the subject. I hope that it will help you and thankyou for sharing your sad, recent news here.
Keep strong and writing your poems and lyrics too.
With All Good Wishes from
Marrianna x
I will.
But a big Thanks anyways x
Jackdaw1888 :-)