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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: Krysoe on November 08, 2017, 03:04:15 PM
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Hello All, I'm new here and this is my first upload.
Basic idea of the song is my response to every one who think they are more than other, more clever than other better than other, etc. Often when you investigate such people more detailed they can be categorized as "Hot Air" or totally ripped for basic social empathy or they are feeling without empathy.
Often, politicians and especially very rich politicians fall into this category.
I'm happy to get all kind of productive feedback
Thanks in advance
Best Regards
Klaus Rysoe
Denmark
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Nice guitar tone man. This is kinda Floydy.
Nearly turned it off though when I saw another song moaning about that Trump joker.
My advice is use your imagination, dont be deceived into thinking world news makes good songs, avoid cliched topics.
Your voice would certainly sound clearer if you took out the other vocal takes running alongside, but I understand how confidence plays a big part in that.
Hope that's not too negative man, because its a good sound you got here.
Review some songs here and peeps will get you back.
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Hej Klaus, welcome.
I liked the languid guitars in this - very elegantly played. Like Silver Machine, I heard a bit of Pink Floyd in this - your solos are a bit like Gilmour.
I liked the track overall, maybe it was a little long - snip a minute off and I felt you've got something strong here.
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It's amazing how the media can affect people all around the world,
I generally don't like political songs and think that the best among them are those you won't even notice what they are about.
It does feel like a Gilmourish protest tune with your guitar and vocal style.
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Dear all - thanks a million for the nice words and very constructive replies. I will for sure take each of them into account moving to next phase in the production the process.
Yes I must admit Roger W and David G have influenced me throughout the years and I can promise you this was my first only and last attempt to be political :)
Question: Hw do you add pictures to your profile in this board ?
Regards
Klaus
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Great song!
The instrumentation is top notch!
The vocals could be brought up a bit (maybe more than a bit)
special thanks for the guitar parts! Awesome listening!