Hi Hugozhor,
I have no problem with the structure, although I would call the pre-chorus a bridge and the choruses the outro.
I do have a problem with your grammar though as it makes the lyrics difficult to read, or sing. For example, "Is it meant to be easy living is a crime?". This can be taken to mean several things. "Is easy living a crime?" "Is it meant to be that my life will always be hard?" Or even "Is it meant to be that I have to pay for the crime of easy living?"
I think "Is it meant to be?" "Is easy living a crime?" works better. You are asking why is your life as it is and how welcome an easy time would be.
I could make suggestions as to the use of grammar for the other verses but I may be putting words into your song that you never intended.
Feel free to ignore me if you disagree, but if you'd like me to continue just ask.
Overall I think the lyrics could work well and the outro could be spectacular with the right music.
diadem