Hi Marrianna
I think this stands up well as it is a well crafted lyric maybe give it an acoustic feel guitar/flute and see how it progresses.
Good luck with this like to hear it when finished.
Royston
Hi Royston,
Hope you are well and it's good to be in contact here again. I'm pleased with your comment so am considering further the idea of a flute. A guitar would make an interesting addition and so will keep the idea in mind. Thankyou for your thoughts on this set of words.
Marrianna :-)
I adore these lyrics.
But soon I will post an ode entitled...
A ROBIN's TALE.
Hope you enjoy it.
Jackdaw1888 :-)
I look forward to seeing them. Robins are lovely birds too. thankyou for your kind praise.
Marrianna :-)
You are most welcome Marrianna.
An yes... The Red Robin is etched within the times and folklore of Mankind.
Regards
Jackdaw1888 :-)
