Well, first of all you rocked the shit out of this man!!🔥🤘🏻🔥 really impressive vocals and music!! Mix seems great to my ears on Samsung buds.
The song itself is great aswell, it immediately made me think of an old fave of mine....Genesis "Jesus he knows me". Its a great topic to write about and for me personally is very relevant. I am an ex Mormon, turned Atheist....so the lyrics are close to home.
With that in mind the only thing that stuck out to me in way of critique is that you wouldn't say "come to me and baptise". You could say "come to me, be baptised". The only person who can "baptise" is the religious person performing the ceremony.👍🏻 likewise "they came to me and baptized" could be "they came to me got baptized".👍🏻 (I’ve written the sentences so that the phrasing in the song should hopefully still work.👍🏻)
Anyway I hope that helps mate. Fantastic song for a mornings work!!!😱😁🎶👊🏻🎶