Yo Messager and welcome to the hallowed,piss stained walls that make up this little corner of the internet.
The pieces as they currently stand make all the right noises to exist as a song. Perhaps there are some ingredients still required to hold the listeners attention. Some vocals? Solo instruments? Much as pompeyjazz suggested. I can hear him itching to get at the tracks from where I sit!
If he asks,don't promise to do that special thing he likes so much and don't ask me how I know.
Both tracks are very musical,but imo still need to be finished.
If you really wish to progress and work with other folk,then get involved with the forum,you'll find us very approachable,since we all share a fetish for songwriting.