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What If Tomorrow - Adult Contemporary / Pop
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Summerblue
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What If Tomorrow - Adult Contemporary / Pop
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June 12, 2017, 11:55:10 AM »
Hello!
I recently finished this song and would be happy to hear your comments:
Thanks for listening,
Tom
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Gill
Open Mic
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Re: What If Tomorrow - Adult Contemporary / Pop
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June 12, 2017, 04:07:51 PM »
Hello and welcome! The verses are good and so is the chorus though it sounds a 'bit boy-bandish in the 00's in the chorus? In a good way. Great song altogether though!
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PaulyX
Stadium Tour
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Re: What If Tomorrow - Adult Contemporary / Pop
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June 13, 2017, 09:22:34 PM »
Hi Tom, welcome.
Your track sounds very contemporary to me. Good voice with slick production. I like the way it doesn't mess about at the end.
I reckon you could add more into the chorus (a few more layers of tracks) to give them a bigger lift and distinguish them from the verses a little more... some more dynamics would help this fly I felt.
Can you post the lyrics here?
Good luck with the track,
Pauly
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It's all too beautiful.
Cawproductions
Platinum Album
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Re: What If Tomorrow - Adult Contemporary / Pop
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June 13, 2017, 09:41:11 PM »
Hi
Nice track with good quality vocals,
Productions great too, Your vocal would sit great with a drum and bass production and heavy bass.
I love it, Screaming for a DnB remix to go with your original.
Great work,
Andy
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Summerblue
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June 28, 2017, 01:23:52 PM »
Hi everyone!
Thanks for your comments so far!
Best, Tom
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