Listening to the new recording.
The recording starts absolutely heartwarmingly. The vocals come so nicely too...
One little thing; When you say "go away" you give a long break between these words, making the listener wait for the word "away", it's a predictable word to be coming after a break, so I would wish you would sustain "go" and tie it with "away". Just a thought... ("Nothing to say but this" part doesn't have this issue for me, I love it)
The chorus is growing on me also... But you sing "oh" in "oh I do", it sounds a little too strong and treble driven for my taste.
Big fan of soulful chord progression and guitar playing, I need to re-emphasize that...
Thanks for the music