Following on from seeing what I could come up with, I thought I could move the line about the drink to further into the song.
Verse 1 could then be
He believes that the Hylton's his home
And the park is his garden with its statue and seat
The subway's his shelter
From the rain or summer heat ... etc.
Then further into the song ...
When he wakes up in London
Drinking wine with the dawn
Has he dreamed Hyde Park Corner
Was the place he was born
The last verse could be changed sllightly to:
He believes that the Hylton's his home
But his life is on the outside
He can only look in
At the crystal and splendour
That isn't there for him
I would be pleased for some feedback on the changes
Thankyou all
Marrianna