Posted this in WOP a couple of weeks ago and I've now done a bit of work on the recording; tried to push the boat out a bit with this one, playing around with mixed tempos. Still a bit of work to do particularly on the guitar parts and vocals, but I'd welcome comments in particular on how i can improve the production. Still a long way to go there.
Mike
https://soundcloud.com/mike-warnes/broken-wordsBroken words
Broken words and a twist of fate
The final show; one last embrace
A shallow gaze betrays the smile
Empty words forming all the while
A drop of rain that turns to stone
A wind that cuts through skin and bone
A wave that breaks and beats the ground
Broken words as the world slows down
Broken words and a twist of fate
Drift along through time and space
Patience dear, the words will kill
Lovers entwined until the world stands still