Hi
my first song posted here for feedback (gulp!) but not my first song - that was a while ago. . .
recording is at
https://soundcloud.com/dasntn/what-is-rightIt's a very personal song - the lyrics reflect my wife's illness - I'd rather not say more about that, but I think it's fairly obvious from the lyric - but I hope the song reflects the struggle of life without being too downbeat or negative.
What Is Right
I’ve been trying all my life
To do no wrong, but do what’s right
Ever since my love for you
We vowed together to be true
We’ve been together so long now, I know
Open and honest our partnership flows
Good times and hard times, but always we’d mend
And I believed this is how we would end
I’ve been trying all my life
To do no wrong, but do what’s right
Now a change has come to you
How can I keep my words true
You see things now that I just cannot see
Mem’ries arrive that are unknown to me
But you are sure that your world is so true
Should I live in your world to keep faith with you
You were the heart of so much of my life
Families and children and work and home time
But now your memories cloud into mist
Live for the moment is how we exist
I’ve been trying all my life
To do no wrong, but do what’s right
Now I know that lies to you
Are how I keep our love vow true
And I will keep all our memories safe
Pass to our children their future to make
As our love passes from one life to next
Together Eternal our love resurrects