Here's a song I recorded very Primitively with my band. It's supposed to be a hard driving rock song with influences from jack white, slash, and led zeppelin. I wrote this song after one of my guitars necks snapped. I hope you enjoy.
Here are the words
Got a body inside my guitar case
It can't protect me from you no more
Broken neck and a whole lot of heart ache
I thought the worst was out the door.
And I get it he moved first!
I was distracted never made any action towards you
and I guess it's a fools curse!
Exotic lips, at my fingertips.
yeah, she was sacred
you went and smashed her on the pavement
she's breaking
what are you fighting for?
You're invasive
My mind is vacant,
but yours is like a locked door.
She lacks the patience
Know's no waiting
Yeah you give her a chance and she takes it
so face it
without her I'm nothing I'm naked
You're the apex predator.
I'm like a pit without a bottom,
she's like a mountain without a top
What life is like without her, I have forgotten,
She was my one last shot.
And I was blinded by the glory of the situation
Didn't realize that nothing was real
Didn't realize that she would be my desolation
without her I forgot how to feel!
yeah, she was sacred
you went and smashed her on the pavement
she's breaking
what are you fighting for?
You're invasive
My mind is vacant,
but yours is like a locked door.
She lacks the patience
Know's no waiting
Yeah you give her a chance and she takes it
so face it
without her I'm nothing I'm naked
You're the apex predator.
yeah, she was sacred
you went and smashed her on the pavement
she's breaking
what are you fighting for?
You're invasive
My mind is vacant,
but yours is like a locked door.
She lacks the patience
Know's no waiting
Yeah you give her a chance and she takes it
so face it
without her I'm nothing I'm naked
You're the apex predator.
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