Thanks very much for all your comments and advice people.
Skub, no ones said they like my voice before and that is a lesson on why you should continue with your daw learning. Without mine I would sound like a cat with a firework up its backside.
Boydie thanks, interestingly, the first line was originally 'I should have bought you flowers'. I'm not particularly familiar with the Bruno Mars song but I had obviously subconsciously absorbed it at some point. I was very annoyed with myself when I realised.
Caliamoko, glad you approve, thanks for the advice.
Crystalsuzy, thanks a lot glad you enjoyed it.
Wish I had time to respond to the rest of you but I appreciate all your comments.
Thanks
Yodasdad