Hi guys! I wrote a song a while ago, and I don't really know what to do with it. I don't even know if it's alright, maybe it's crap, you tell me.
I'd like to get some feedback, bc you probably know what you're talking about, and i don't.
I don't have a title yet, so if anyone has any suggestions, spill it!
(it's kinda short, i know)
Lyrics:
I knew you wanted to run away, 'cause your eyes weren't as blue as before. I really wanted you to stay, it made me grab your hand even more. I tried to hide you inside my darkest fears, but you wanted to leave and now all that is left are your souvenirs.
Now I'm staring at my poorly painted ceiling, while you're probably watching the stars, and I'm starting to get the feeling, that I should go back to the start.
Chorus:
I should have bought your tickets and help you catch your flight, when you told me you were unhappy, you may have been right.
Because I shouldn't have stopped you, I should've gone along, because when I said I was happy, I was totally wrong.
I never realized how terrible I had it, you always made me smile. even if I threw a fit, you just stayed quiet for a while.
But now the silence is killing me, I want to hear you whispering at half past three.
I should have bought your tickets and help you catch your flight, because I'd rather say hello than goodbye.