Hey there Grubstar............I think the music is just fine, and the lyric is Great. The only nit I have is with the lyric, however. Easter is a time for renewal and rebirth, the coming back to life. With that said, I was looking for some healthy optimism, some rebounding, while standing in that Easter rain. Something to think about ;-)
Anyways......some good stuff, here.....keep on...
-Tom