A big Thank You to all who have taken the time to listen and provide invaluable feedback as usual
@PeteS Good points - It's so good to get forum feedback and to hear all the different opinions. Thanks for the listen
@montydog - Wow ! Thanks Alan, much appreciated indeed. I hope that my production has improved over the 5 years or so I've been making music again
@shadowfax - Thanks Kev - Yep
@Sterix has a huge stash of lyrics. I'll investigate the bass and drums again
@MichaelA - Thanks Michael - I seem to find it easier to mix wall of sound type pieces than songs that require a more subtle touch - Right, back to the shopping list song
@Grubstar - Thanks so much - Can't ask for much better feedback
@Jamie - I'll have a look at the delay thanks. I've certainly made more music than usual in lockdown. Your feedback is much appreciated.
@PaulyX - Yes, fabulous lyrics - I kind of had an idea what they were about when I did the vocal but not entirely. Thanks so much for the feedback
@Skub - Yup ! Fairytale Kiss (NOT) I find it fascinating putting other folks lyrics to music
@MonnoDB - Thanks Karen - You're right about the vocals at the start - I'll have to adjust
@PaulAds - Cheers Paul - I ummed and ahhed a bit about keeping that root bass note - Thought that it might be a bit too much "Eye Of The Tiger"
- Glad nobody's mentioned that
@cowparsleyman - Cheers Rich - I've pm'd you about the drums
@Sebandme - Thank you indeed - Very kind
@The Estuary (SWE) - Thanks guys, really appreciated. I'd never even considered working on collabs before joining the forum but since then I must have worked with around 20 other folks - I find the whole thing very inspiring
Thank you all once again