Stack Shelves , Dream Free - collab with Lostboy

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cmooremusic

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« Reply #15 on: December 14, 2016, 03:50:43 PM »
Cool idea and really nicely executed

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« Reply #16 on: December 14, 2016, 07:31:55 PM »
Rock n roll in Brilliant form, amazing talent of ideas you come up with Tina and Leo great job on vocals and playing that air guitar, but you're going to have to lose some weight okay  ;D  ;D 

You're heading toward an album Tina   8)

CaliaMoko

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« Reply #17 on: December 15, 2016, 09:54:28 PM »
I'm going to sneak a quick note in here. I love this a lot. It's got to be about my favorite of yours so far, Tina! It tells a great story and the vocals are awesome! I don't hear or see any nits at all. I am big on harmonies, so I totally agree some harmonies would add a nice dimension.

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« Reply #18 on: December 16, 2016, 11:40:17 AM »
Great fun Tinam,

I can really see Kevin rocking out with his air guitar.

As for the real guitar, very accomplished as usual.

I'd perhaps like the vocals a little bit higher in the mix but apart from that this is a catchy ball of energy that paints the picture well.

Very imaginative

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« Reply #19 on: December 16, 2016, 11:59:55 AM »
Hi,

Great energy in the song. There are also some excellent bass lines.
Overall the drum beat is very good but the solo beat is quite confusing.

Good work!

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danieltrigger

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« Reply #20 on: December 17, 2016, 06:21:41 PM »
This really worked for me. Putting the comedy aside for a sec, I liked the arrangement and the performances, particularly the lead guitar and the punk-orientated manic bass. Skillful stuff.

I enjoyed the vocal and the lyrics, very creative. Certainly couldn't think of many other songs of this nature, so that's also a good thing! :) Cool.

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« Reply #21 on: December 18, 2016, 05:59:38 PM »
Great idea...and brilliantly executed

the voices are SO well done and the guitars are fantastic

a great collab
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« Reply #22 on: December 18, 2016, 06:31:18 PM »
Nothing short of fabulous.   Conjures up a very vivid picture of both son and mother.  I'm sure there are plenty of people that could relate!
Fun song put together brilliantly.   Made for a really good listen.
Congrats guys
Cheers
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Morefrog Jones

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« Reply #23 on: December 18, 2016, 11:37:33 PM »
John Peel would have loved this :)

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« Reply #24 on: December 19, 2016, 07:37:23 PM »
thank you all so much for the extra reviews & lovely comments!
I think its time I pointed out that is not Leo & me in the youtube video!  :)
Leo used a body double
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« Reply #25 on: December 20, 2016, 12:22:20 AM »
OMG! I just about fell off my chair laughing  ;D This is hilarious, but sadly, so true...some kids
just don't want to grow up  :o
I love the two sets of vocals, and the guitar playing is fantastic :o
The drums, bass...everything sounds spot on to me  :o
Very cleverly put together track, and so well performed!
Great collab guys :)

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« Reply #26 on: December 20, 2016, 03:03:19 PM »
Tina,

As ever originality and great playing are your touchstones. I loved the basic idea which was brilliantly executed - the rhyming of sweat and supermarket is bloody genius. I just don't know where you get your ideas from and to then convert them into this level of sophistication is mind boggling.

Totally friggin' cosmic.

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