Hi Tony,
it may be my age but I found the lyrics sleazy, which I suspect was the intention. I'm not sure if pervy is the same as sleazy but to me they have distinct meanings.
On to the words. I don't think the order of the verses work, the punch line is in the first verse. I'd be inclined to start with the chorus and move onto ohh that's sweet as juice etc. up to the next chorus. I'd then add the two verses (not sure if the verses are 4 lines or
"I've got no morals...". After the chorus "I lurk in the shadows etc." I'd finish with your first 8 lines. I'm not keen on the "I've seen some of your bills..." I don't think they add anything.
Hope all this makes sense. If not, let me know and I'll cut and paste the order I'd like to see.
Two good results for you today,
diadem