[benjo]

 hey thanks for your comments and feed back jess

 always means a lot HA HA yeah see what you mean about the bits that make you laugh
 but in these kind of splits its amazing what gets thrown up in the air
 there was a song about that a while ago two pop stars broke up and they made a point of
 throwing it in each others face I think they said        YOUR SEX WAS WHACK

 it is a funny thing though

                          hope you understand what I mean anyway

                                     THANKS AGAIN

[PeeJay]

Hi Tony,

This is a good one.

Unusual in that the subject wishes well for his ex when normally there is bitterness.

Really nice touch to have it start and finish with the names on the window.

It all flows along nicely and gives a complete story.

Phil.

[EattheChildren]

I really enjoyed reading this. The rhyming was well done and effortless. The whole rhythm flowed perfectly. The lyrics are relatable, which is key to selling a song, so great job on that.

Like everyone else stated the whole sex line was a bit off-center, but I wanted to point out the title. To me, it seemed a little sarcastic, and so I was thinking the lyrics would be more bitter towards the ex. This may just be me, but I just wanted to put my two cents in

Great write and a pleasure to read

[Gwyneth Rose]

    
 HI Benjo

Absolutely loved this. Awesome write. Don't know if you looking for any suggs
on the very controversal line about the sex thing, so keep or sweep this one

found your old phone
the texts painfully clear
it really hurt to read
had to fight the tears

Cheers
Gwyneth

[benjo]

 hey guys some great feed back THANK YOU SO MUCH

 PEEJAY, EATTHECHILDREN, GWENYTH ROSE

                 cheers as always great advice I will be thinking hard on