[Richards440]

Hey dude,

I find it hard to just read lyrics so i normally play or find a chord structure just to sing it to and the one that I found for this was brilliant, almost a perfect fit if you play around with it a little.

Either way I just wanted to say that for me this was great. I'll put the link in for you to maybe have a look at and see where i am coming from.

21:39 come to me and do your crying

Regards
Jordan Richards

[benjo]

 
  RICHARDS440,
     

  WOW,  WHAT STUNNING MELODIES / GUITAR PLAYNG

 yeah I can really  see where you are going with that idea  I LOVE IT
 so glad you enjoyed this lyric you have got great vision



          THANK YOU SO MUCH FO YOUR KIND WORDS AND FEEDBACK



                               TONY...

[onemanband]

Hey Benjo,

Thats a superb.

I really hope you find someone to put music to it, would love to hear a proper job done on them.

nothing can touch me
 I'm up in the sky
 euphorically laughing
 as my life rushes by

A really intriguing opening verse, I think you are guaranteed the listener will stay the course after hearing that.

Also this..

rainbows in rain drops
 the pink lemon trees

makes me wonder what you were smoking when you wrote this, lovely imagery though.

Great stuff.

[benjo]

 OMB,

 thank so much for your feed back 


   funny yeah this has been covered twice and I'm so happy with both


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