Hey so this is a song I was working on at like 4 in the morning a few nights ago and I just never had the chance to finish it, and I can't really remember where I was going with it I mean I still feel the emotion but I'm abit stuck with the last few verses, so if anyone has any help that would be so appreciated I would be really grateful, so yeah any feedback and help would be fab thankyou!!
V1
I need an escape
A new story a new fate
Why won't these thoughts leave my mind
I'm tired feeling this pain inside
V2
I'm done reasoning
Begging myself not to cry
No one else is to blame this time
I'm bleeding myself dry
Pre chorus
Can't see a tomorrow
Can't see a next week
Don't want to cry
Don't want to be so weak
Chorus?
I wanna wake up and feel okay
I want to remember how to smile
But not every story has a happy ending
I've known this for a long while
Bridge
I guess I always knew deep down inside
This is my life, I guess I'm too tired
The fight in me has subsided
Who though I would ever be so quiet