Hi guys,
After a few months back I'm looking at revisiting some music creations.
Any thoughts on this one as I'd like to revisit it and polish it into something better.
https://soundcloud.com/v8burble/cheating-in-my-dreamsCheating in my Dreams – Composed by Phil Stewart 2015
It’s a lazy Sunday morning
I’m laying back in bed
I’ve got a funny feeling
That’s flowing through my head
There’s flutters in my stomach
Something I can’t place
A vision in my mind
of an unfamiliar face
[Chorus]
And I’m cheating, cheating
Oh I’m cheating in my dreams
Every time I close my eyes
My life isn’t what is seems
And I’m cheating, cheating
Oh I’m cheating in my dreams
Every time I drop my head
My life isn’t what it seems
[and now sleep]
I wake up in a cold sweat
And a feeling I should now regret
I know that there is something wrong
But nothing else is going on
I’m guilty, I’m dirty
I know the girl will hurt me
Though I really can’t control my mind
I’m looking for a cure I’ll find
And I’m cheating, cheating
Oh I’m cheating in my dreams
Every time I close my eyes
My life isn’t what is seems
And I’m cheating, cheating
Oh I’m cheating in my dreams
Every time I close my eyes
My life isn’t what it seems
And I’m cheating, cheating
Oh I’m cheating in my dreams
Every time I close my eyes
My life isn’t what is seems
And I’m cheating, cheating
Oh I’m cheating in my dreams
Every time I close my eyes
this girl is inside my dreams
[the last line actually sings "my girl is inside my dreams" but I'm planning on changing this]