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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Works in Progress => Topic started by: Jane99 on August 31, 2013, 03:12:31 PM

Title: Guitar is guitar
Post by: Jane99 on August 31, 2013, 03:12:31 PM

Hey :) so this is really short but i just don't know if i should keep writing. Please tell me what you think about it.

I don't wear the clothes you would
I don't speak like you would
but look at me
do you think that i will ever change?
You can't use a guitar to play violin
'cause guitar is guitar and I'm who i am
ohoo Guitar is guitar

Title: Re: Guitar is guitar
Post by: GTB on August 31, 2013, 10:26:13 PM

Hi Jane99,

Is there any music to this?  I think it probably should be posted in the 'lyrics' section until it gets music where you'll get plenty of comments for sure. 

Keep going with it though!  It's a great idea for a song with lots of potential.
cheers,
GTB

Title: Re: Guitar is guitar
Post by: FrankieLaw on December 03, 2013, 09:35:21 AM

Hey,
i agree with above stick it in lyrics and im sure you would get a bit more feedback,
the the lyrics
are cool and catchy
keep going, you never know how a songs going to end unless you finish it :)

Frankie Law