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Title: Countdown To Zero
Post by: ChrisPrice on September 11, 2021, 12:13:26 AM



COUNTDOWN TO ZERO
Words and Music by Chris Price ©2021

Down at the club, down at the bar, down at the rendezvous
Out in the corner there’s a long dark figure staring down at you

Fly on the wall, face to face
Head in the clouds, lovin’ someone
Maybe some time, maybe some day
I’ll make it home n baby I’ll say

Countdown to zero, ignitions on
Countdown to zero, baby here I come

Over there by the square there’s somebody that longs for you
She has that look in her eye, baby make you want her too

Fly on the wall, face to face
Head in the clouds, lovin’ someone
Maybe some time, maybe some day
I’ll make it home n baby I’ll say

Countdown to zero, ignitions on
Countdown to zero, baby here I come

On my website (currently song 36):
https://5ded45f1cd13e.site123.me/
Title: Re: Countdown To Zero
Post by: moraamarolaloba on September 11, 2021, 04:48:20 PM
Love this one @ChrisPrice (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=22723)
There is an autentique original sound here!!! Very pleasant listening!

Stay well

Mora
Title: Re: Countdown To Zero
Post by: rightly on September 11, 2021, 05:59:01 PM
go get 'em sonny!
bass guitars lovely, you're killing it!
Are we not missing a blistering solo?
I think there's room in that bridge section

A refreshing upbeat blaster though
nice one!
Title: Re: Countdown To Zero
Post by: MonnoDB on September 12, 2021, 05:18:06 PM
Great rocker @ChrisPrice (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=22723) - had a bit of a Stones intro..

You are very polished, sir - everything as it should be and catchy as hell.. played beautifully and you have a perfect rock vocal.

No crits just a wow!

K
Title: Re: Countdown To Zero
Post by: LostBoy on September 12, 2021, 09:02:35 PM
Hell yeah Chris!! U rocked the shit out of this. Very accomplished in all areas. I’m very impressed that you got all that in two and a half minutes!!😱👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 That’s an Everest of mine! Very catchy and a cracking ending. Mix sounds good on apple pods.👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

I doth my cap to you sir!🤩🎶👊🏻🎶
Title: Re: Countdown To Zero
Post by: Wicked Deeds on September 18, 2021, 06:20:29 PM
@ChrisPrice (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=22723), yet another immediately catchy song from you.  It leads us in nicely with the very direct bass-line and before you know it, we're skilfully led into the anthemic chorus with a feast of electric guitars and fine vocals.  So much to like here Chris!

Paul
Title: Re: Countdown To Zero
Post by: Melusine2 on October 05, 2021, 07:37:56 PM
Rocky and efficient song. Vocals are great ! I nodded my head 🙂, bravo
Title: Re: Countdown To Zero
Post by: pompeyjazz on October 05, 2021, 07:39:09 PM
Loved this @ChrisPrice (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=22723) a no holds barred in yer face rocker. Great catchy chorus and loved the guitars and bass as usual. Top stuff and top attitude