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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: ChrisPrice on September 11, 2021, 12:13:26 AM
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COUNTDOWN TO ZERO
Words and Music by Chris Price ©2021
Down at the club, down at the bar, down at the rendezvous
Out in the corner there’s a long dark figure staring down at you
Fly on the wall, face to face
Head in the clouds, lovin’ someone
Maybe some time, maybe some day
I’ll make it home n baby I’ll say
Countdown to zero, ignitions on
Countdown to zero, baby here I come
Over there by the square there’s somebody that longs for you
She has that look in her eye, baby make you want her too
Fly on the wall, face to face
Head in the clouds, lovin’ someone
Maybe some time, maybe some day
I’ll make it home n baby I’ll say
Countdown to zero, ignitions on
Countdown to zero, baby here I come
On my website (currently song 36):
https://5ded45f1cd13e.site123.me/
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Love this one @ChrisPrice (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=22723)
There is an autentique original sound here!!! Very pleasant listening!
Stay well
Mora
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go get 'em sonny!
bass guitars lovely, you're killing it!
Are we not missing a blistering solo?
I think there's room in that bridge section
A refreshing upbeat blaster though
nice one!
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Great rocker @ChrisPrice (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=22723) - had a bit of a Stones intro..
You are very polished, sir - everything as it should be and catchy as hell.. played beautifully and you have a perfect rock vocal.
No crits just a wow!
K
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Hell yeah Chris!! U rocked the shit out of this. Very accomplished in all areas. I’m very impressed that you got all that in two and a half minutes!!😱👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 That’s an Everest of mine! Very catchy and a cracking ending. Mix sounds good on apple pods.👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
I doth my cap to you sir!🤩🎶👊🏻🎶
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@ChrisPrice (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=22723), yet another immediately catchy song from you. It leads us in nicely with the very direct bass-line and before you know it, we're skilfully led into the anthemic chorus with a feast of electric guitars and fine vocals. So much to like here Chris!
Paul
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Rocky and efficient song. Vocals are great ! I nodded my head 🙂, bravo
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Loved this @ChrisPrice (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=22723) a no holds barred in yer face rocker. Great catchy chorus and loved the guitars and bass as usual. Top stuff and top attitude