[irwin]

This is a song I have written (lyrics and melody) Vocal by Dattie Do, arrangement and demo record Vladimir Grebenkin. We plan to pitch this song. Your feedback will be very much appreciated.

Below is the link to my song: "I love you inside out:

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I love you inside out
©2014 Irwin Abrigo

- (Verse 1)
today is your day
I wanna do things your way
Lift the spirit high
and make it a special day
Tonight will come a live
I'm gonna lay at your side
And we'll be making love
Just like the first time

- (Chorus)
You're a special lady
and I love you only
I'll give my heart and soul
unto you baby
There ain't nothing I wouldn't do
for you
And in my heart there ain't no doubt
I'm the one who loves you inside out

- (Verse 2)
Honey it's okay
I wanna to know your wishes
Your wish is my command
I'll do what you say
Tonight we'll light a fire
I'm gonna take you higher
Hold you in my arms
Like I've hold no other

- (Chorus)
You're a special lady
and I love you only
I'll give my heart and soul
unto you baby
There ain't nothing I wouldn't do
for you
And in my heart there ain't no doubt
I'm the one who loves you inside out
- -

Inside out there ain't no doubt
There ain't no doubt that I'm the one
I'm the one who loves you you know It's true
You know I do and I care for you
Truly you have proven
With no doubt
I'm the one, who loves you
inside out
I love you inside out
Inside out...

You're a special one
You're special to me
Oh baby !
I wanna spend the rest of my life
With you....
Inside out there ain't no doubt
There ain't no doubt that I'm the one
I'm the one who loves you you know It's true
Ooh I love you inside, inside, inside out.

[tokenangmoh]

Hi.

Seems to be a problem with the link here. Not all of it is inside the URL tag, and it doesn't seem to be accurate anyway...

[irwin]

Hi  tokenangmoh, I am sorry about the link not working. I now have edit my post and sent another link that is working. Thanks for letting me know.

Irwin

[Paulski]

Love the production - was that done in a pro studio? Vocals are excellent - reminds me of a 70's Motown sound. Lyrically it's not very deep - not much background story there - but the arrangement variation keeps interest up pretty well. I don't understand how you can love someone inside out - but I guess that's a lot..
Overall, nice work!
Paul

[Jamie]

Hi, great vocal delivery and melody, reminded of the lines George Michael would sing. I don't know why, but I found the overall sound a bit tiring to listen to, I can't really describe it technically but it sounded to me like everything was recorded with max reverb and made it too spacey for me to enjoy. The song is really good though.
Nice one!
Cheer
Jamie

[saipan]

Great vocal delivery. The arrangement is impressive, I liked the intro in particular.

A good pop song. Very well done.

[stavcoby]

Yeah man very cool, very early mow-town Michael Jackson,loved the groove, vocals are ace.  I think may be master compression took away the dynamics of your chorus, i could sense the chorus come up, but couldn't hear it come up!! Hope that makes sense? haha maybe less master compression less the bass jive through great song though, wouldn't be missing in a 70's collection cd.

[tokenangmoh]

Hi Irwin,

I'm getting early MJ as well.

Good tune, great vocal and apt lyrics.

But the master is clipping all over the place! It feels over-compressed, distorted, and then as if it was encoded to 96kbps mp3 then re-encoded to 48kbps. Is this really how it left the studio? Or has YouTube done something horrible to it? It's really odd to hear something so well produced sound so damaged - like someone threw a can of Ronseal over an Old Master.

If you have a better encoding / master of this, could you upload it, please? (SoundCloud's not perfect, but it's a lot better than YouTube...)

Matt

[chrishair]

Hi there
I enjoyed the song, nice summery vibes. Great voice and like the Motown style production. Agree with the comments that something seems to have been overdone compression-wise, bud didn't spoil the song for me.
Chris

[vladimir]

Hi,guys!
it's me,demo-producer of this song.
You are right,our demo is poor of quality,
but our main goal - find producer for this song.
poor sound of this demo - my fault,
Anyway i think Irwin wrote good song,
and i made not very bad arrangement.
Thanks for Your comments!
Vlad

[Boydie]

The song is really nice and I can also hear the Motown influence

You will really need to sort out the clipping if you want to pitch this - if you have produced it to this standard surely you are able to go through it and sort out your "gain staging" to eliminate the clipping/distortion?

If you do review the mix it might be worth taming some of the effects as it is very "wet" in places (especially the delay on the vocal)

The overall sound is a little "dated" to my ears so I wonder where you intend pitching?

[Neil C]

Good title. Fab vocalist support the catchy melody. Like the guitars and strings and get the retro soul influence.
Warm and positive.
 
Neil

[irwin]

Hi  Paulski, Thanks for listening to my song and for the comments you'd made. The Bee Gees had a hit song entitled "Love you inside out'  Don't you remember?.

I appreciate you taking the time to reply.

Irwin.

[bewarethisboy]

Very commercial - extremely viable. Great singer - good song. Best of luck with it. BTB

[irwin]

Hi, great vocal delivery and melody, reminded of the lines George Michael would sing. I don't know why, but I found the overall sound a bit tiring to listen to, I can't really describe it technically but it sounded to me like everything was recorded with max reverb and made it too spacey for me to enjoy. The song is really good though.
Nice one!
Cheer
Jamie

 I appreciate this a lot. Thanks for the reply

Irwin