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Feedback on Finished songs / If You Go
« Last post by RC James on Today at 09:44:08 PM »
One thing’s for sure, if you go
You'll turn my world around
Sun won’t come up, I’ll go stone crazy
If you commence to leave this town

If you go
Ohh baby, if you go

I’ll get another job don’t worry
The lights and water turned back on
Don't be in such a gosh darn hurry
Why can’t you at least wait ‘til dawn

Now hold on, it’s a doggone fact
We had our share of good times
I told you eventually I’d pay you back
All you remember are my little crimes

You go on your cross country jaunt
Our dreams will go up in smoke
I’ll give you anything you want
And you know that’s not an idle joke

Reconsider the consequences
After everything we’ve had together
You gonna go an’ call ‘em coincidences
You got me wantin’ to ride hell for leather

If you go
Ohh baby, if you go
If you go
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Nothing Wrong
« Last post by RC James on Today at 09:41:22 PM »
Deep and emotional - the instrumentation is on point.
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Escaping
« Last post by RC James on Today at 09:38:17 PM »
Yes, Yes, Yes!
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Escaping
« Last post by moraamarolaloba on Today at 05:19:02 PM »
Good morning @moraamarolaloba,

There are always interesting musical elements and lyrical observations to your work.  There's an uneasiness to the music here and I'm sure that this is your intention.  The lyrics convey your observations of life, at times commenting on the many actions that we all take for granted yet are aspects of living.  From the breath that we take to the poetic observation of the fog that wraps around the street lamp.  The street lamp image is in my opinion, the strongest lyric here.  I don't observe a strong lyrical message but note that it is fascinating how you turn every day observations into a story that engulfs the listener and invites us all to think more deeply about our day to day lives and actions.  It clearly says "I am here, i have lived and these are my observations".

Paul

Hola @Paul V 
Thank you so much!!!
I consider this song to be very abstract and I am surprised that it is more widely accepted than my other songs...
The lines are simple, there are no convoluted or deep words, just describing someone running in the cold night, leaving the vapor of her breath in the air, the fog dressing the lights with faint gauze, streets and more streets, everything is normal except for who is running or fleeing. And suddenly, "The Rose of Winds is asleep in the bones of yesterday"?

The current world moves very fast but... towards the past, the North is lost, that is my metaphor, the woman runs forward.

As for the arrangement; I like it and handle it well in my ears, the rhythm is important but above all the atmospheres created, I like to fantasize with sounds, I am very gypsy.

See you!!!

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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Do You Dare?
« Last post by Elvis Nash on Today at 03:59:47 PM »
 Hey man
Real cool production going on
Very nice classical guitar licks
nice job man !!!
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: What would you dream
« Last post by Elvis Nash on Today at 01:55:10 PM »
Hey George
Very nice arrangement
Great vocals and harmony 
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Escaping
« Last post by Elvis Nash on Today at 01:52:15 PM »
This sound pretty current on a pop level really
Yup were all running , nice job Mora
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Nothing Wrong
« Last post by Elvis Nash on Today at 01:49:40 PM »
Hey man
its very well written and good production , It all flows natural
I use these guys now , https://audiomack.com/
There all about the same though .. money for spins
Good job !!!
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: The Perfect Storm
« Last post by Elvis Nash on Today at 01:42:54 PM »
I've always love the Phrase "Perfect Storm " You did a great job on this Nick !!
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