[BeadyRoller]

Lyrics:

Is it selfish of me
That I still think I'm seventeen
And don't have a care in the world

Choose to wake up at dawn
But not get up till half past four
And still don't have a care in the world

Some might say that I'm rude
Others think that I'm crude
But I'm not letting up
I don't care what they say

Look after number one
That's what I've always done
I'll never let it up
Now be on your way

Do something with your life
Is often what I am advised
And they think I listen to what they say

They couldn't be more wrong
In one ear and out the other son
I'll still be laughing come what may

Link: https://soundcloud.com/roloasis/number-1-demo


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Thanks very much for all the feedback on my last song.

I feel like this recording is a little better, I've made sure the vocal is more prominent!

Any feedback on this one is greatly appreciated, thanks!

[Kristupas]

I'm sorry for being picky, but :DD

You sang : ?

"Is it sell fish of me "

Nice voice, reminds of someone, whose name I forgot ..
Seriously, kind of gentle huskiness from time to time, great.

I like the chorus, how the melody is not monotonic.

Just, I understand its a demo,
but what about the instrumental arrangement,
will it be continuous strumming all along ?

[Maltese_Falcon]

Great voice, great guitar - I may be way off the mark and tell me if I am but I'm hearing some D'ya Know What I Mean by Oasis here

Yeah, good song though, I liked it.  Screaming out for a proper non-demo production I think!